Greets, I just submitted this battle spell modified from a common spell used by wizards, and included versions compatible with both editions. I'm looking for comments about it so that I can take these comments into account for other battle spells(ammong other things) I will submit in the near and not-so near future. Especially, do you like the format presented henceforth, do you think the conversion accurately reflects the power a battle spell should have and if you appreciate it being made for both editions at once, etc...

Comments welcome and seeked. :)